government should spend more money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In fast and forward era people like safe and secure transportation which is in their comfort zone. there are divided views regarding, that council should allocate more funds to railyways compare to roads. I accord with the notions in greater extent however roads are accurately imperative as railway lines.
to embark on it is irrefutable that rails are fastest and affordable means of travel for individual and families as it provide safety and accidents are less likely to occur. besides that they are eco friendly where as roads are the main cause of traffic congestion and air pollution and gives us major diseases like Asthma. For instance Japanese has record in genius book to connect passengers to different cities and destinations with maximum of 7second Delay and with zero catastrophic situation.
however there are sometimes medical issues which cannot wait for trains to arrive and are not equipped with medical emergency procedure equipments therefore roads are essential to construct for life and death situations for earliest reach to hospitals. Moreover in countryside people cannot afford train tickets and they travel by bicycles and motorcycles for there work which is not likely far therefore to connect these people for village to cities management require to give money for roads. For instance railways cannot be used for 24/7 as they require maintenance but roads are the hour of need.
To conclude it is undeniable that railways are less expensive public transport and send hundreds of people to there destinations altogether with no time however government ought to release money for roads as they are equally important for rural areas.
- You took your family to a nearby restaurant. You were disappointed with the meal and wish to complain to the manager.Write a letter to the manager of the restaurant. In your letter, » explain why you were at the restaurant » describe the problems » 89
- Schools are spending more time teaching traditional subjects such as history. Some people think they should rather spend more time in teaching skills that can help students find a job.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh its disadvantages? 56
- Some people think that a person improves their intellectual skill more when doing group activities. To what extent do you agree? 84
- Nowadays many people choose ready made food and refuse to cook at home. Why do you think it happens? What are the advantages and disadvantages of such a choice? 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: There
...rtation which is in their comfort zone. there are divided views regarding, that counc...
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...curately imperative as railway lines. to embark on it is irrefutable that rails ...
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Suggestion: Besides
...and accidents are less likely to occur. besides that they are eco friendly where as roa...
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
...cur. besides that they are eco friendly where as roads are the main cause of traffic con...
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Suggestion: However
...and with zero catastrophic situation. however there are sometimes medical issues whic...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: however,
...and with zero catastrophic situation. however there are sometimes medical issues whic...
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Message: Did you mean 'arriving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: arriving
...cal issues which cannot wait for trains to arrive and are not equipped with medical emerg...
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Suggestion: Moreover,
...ations for earliest reach to hospitals. Moreover in countryside people cannot afford tra...
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to train'
Suggestion: to train
...ver in countryside people cannot afford train tickets and they travel by bicycles and...
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Message: Did you mean 'giving'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: giving
...or village to cities management require to give money for roads. For instance railways ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ought to release money for roads as they are equally important for rural areas. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24344569288 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63854421662 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591760299625 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.9097693314 49.4020404114 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.0 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0781692006409 0.244688304435 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037553577475 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0450355689034 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0596169143215 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477556798743 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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