In the modern era, technology has become an essential part of everyday life. There were many tasks in the past being done manually are now carried out by appliances automatically - with just the click of a button. This essay will examine the positive aspects of task automation and drawbacks of this trend.
From an overall perspective, there are two key advantages of utilizing machines to get things done. Perhaps the main advantage is time-saving which provides an opportunity for people to invest their time in more productive activities. For instance, by using electronic devices such as: washing machine, vacuum cleaner, and dishwasher at home, women tend to save their precious time which they can spend with family, in particular, the focused upbringing of offspring. A further point in favor of machines usage is that the convenience it brings to life. For instance, the strenuous task of loading and unloading of building materials at the construction sites are now done by the cranes. Overall, machines save time and are efficient.
Despite these arguments, many people feel that using machines has negative aspects for a number of reasons. While a machine can perform task in minutes, even without the human intervention, it has made the people’s lifestyle quite sedentary and it is the main reason of development of the health issues at an early age. A recent report issued by the Ministry of Health in Pakistan revealed the fact that 40% of the patients diagnosed with high blood pressure are young people in the age bracket of 30 – 40 - citing non-active way of living is the leading cause of this trend. Another negative impact of the machine is excessive consumption of energy that is needed to operate the machine. Since most of the energy is produced from non-renewable resources, usage of the machine is directly linked to the depletion of natural resources.
To conclude, usage of the machine for task automation is conducive to a certain extent, but adequate measures should be in place to ensure the benefits are not generated at the expense of damage to health and environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while, for instance, in particular, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 61.0 41.998997996 145% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06876790831 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79906374253 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578796561605 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3327536204 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.933333333 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.2666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.73333333333 7.06120827912 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100461202878 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0311835373766 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361287003721 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0567081702285 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297404219954 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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