Many museums charge for admission while others are free.Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

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Many museums charge for admission while others are free.
Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museums outweigh the disadvantages?

Several museums charge visitors money as entry fees, wherein the others are open to public for free entry. This essay agrees that historical places and artefacts should be open to local and tourists to be able to learn and understand the history of the nation. This essay will firstly discuss the benefits of collecting entry fees to the museums, followed by the drawbacks this could bring about to the society and its peoples.

The money collected can be used for the maintenance of the property as well as the salary of the employees working in the museum. Additionally, the museums will only attract people who decide to enter the premised due to their sheer interest to the exhibits. For instance, the Dubai museum located in the prime city location is sometimes crowded by public during summer months to avoid the extreme hot weather.

However, the negative impact of levying admission fee from public over rules the positive impacts. People interested in historical exhibits and artefacts would divert their interest to less or no cost activities. Other impact is the possibility for students to develop an interest to history and dive deep into the subject can be narrowed due to the cost incurred by the parents as well as the schools. Dubai museum is a prime example, where all the educational institutions in Dubai take their students for a look and learn session at least once a year.

In conclusion, despite the few advantages it is recommended to maintain a charge free admission to all the museums inorder to provide the public and students an opportunity to learn and experience the history and culture of the country.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, look, so, well, at least, for instance, in conclusion, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1372.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97101449275 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59510094973 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550724637681 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.181601731 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.727272727 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0909090909 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.18181818182 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256043923515 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923000104933 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0780148574754 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153120432812 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035503849174 0.056905535591 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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