Many old buildings protected by law are part of a nation’s history. Some people think they should be knocked down and replaced by new ones.
How important is it to maintain old buildings?
Should history stand in the way of progress?
Every government in the world protects its old buildings by spending so much of its man power and wealth. In this essay we will examine the importance of preserving ancient structures and if it is a hindrance for the development of the society.
We have to conserve antique buildings, as each construction has a conviction associated with it. For instance, the Eiffel tower was built to commemorate the centennial of the French revolution and to demonstrate the industrial power of France to the world. Moreover, they help us understand the way of living in the past and assist us in evolving into a utopian society. Let us take the ancient temples in India with many inscriptions about the laws that governed them and about the method of construction of the magnificent erections. By providing an insight into our ancestor’s society through the inscriptions, they help us in comprehending the ancient way of life and thereby provide us an opportunity to rectify our mistakes.
People may have the opinion that, these monuments stand in the way of progress by occupying the much needed space and also that the money involved in this should be used in more pressing issues. However, we have to realize that, countless of such buildings have been renovated and are used as hotels and government offices. They also serve as a major tourist attraction and by that generate revenue to the nation. This income can be used for the betterment of the country. Therefore, ancient buildings aid us in progress.
To sum things up, in my perspective, age-old monuments are important as they are rich in values and knowledge, which will lead us to form an ideal society and also, they can be utilized as a source of income, which in turn can be disbursed for the advancement of humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90759075908 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90679085283 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551155115512 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 465.3 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.7012285166 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3076923077 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.69230769231 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18569655232 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584604097771 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0435908648508 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.10547724622 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375887856171 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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