In many parts of the world, children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is this happening? How should they be punished?
The more the world has developed, the more issues we have to handle. One of the most perceptible problems is an alarming increase in the incedence of juvenile delinquency. From my point of view, this matter has resulted from many reasons and should be solved on many levels.
Firstly, indifference of parent to their children can be an underlying reason in a tendency to juvenile delinquency. Particularly, more and more parents are so absorbed in works that they can not spend enough time on taking care of their offsprings. Consequently, if adolescents get into bad company, nobody can prevent them from going astray in the nick of time. This may result in copycat crimes, most commonly alcohol or drug abuse.
Another contributory factor can be the growing popularity of the mass media in which children and teenagers have been come into contact with a variety of content, ranging from violence, sex, sucide to terrorism. As the result, they could commit crimes so as to satisfy their curiosity, such as sexual harassment or even murder.
With regard to penalties for minor crimes, juvenile delinquents to engage in community service is worth taking into account in order for them to not only make up for taking a toll on society but also appreciate the importance of labour. On the other hand, if adolescents carry out, particularly serious offences such as heroin possesion or murder, they must suffer imprisonment for social stability.
In conclusion, the real cause of rather lies in the carelessness of both family and society, therefore it is now time to remedy the phenomenon. With the exception for particularly serious offences, it is advisable that educational penalties should be imposed on adolescent offenders to turn over a new leaf.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 254, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...As the result, they could commit crimes so as to satisfy their curiosity, such as sexual...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, as to, in conclusion, such as, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10034602076 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86030899734 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61937716263 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.6663701181 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.384615385 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204681272817 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648938745424 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520986895923 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102167707334 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582040235203 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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