In many parts of the world today there is a profitable market for products which lighten or whiten people’s skin. Outline the reasons for using such products and discuss what effect they have in terms of health on society?
Presently,there are various sections on Planet Earth that make huge amount of money by selling products which claim to transform skin tone of people. There may be a number of justifications why people use these products.However they might have some serious implications on their well being in terms of health. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Primarily, one of the main reasons why people would wish to use these products is to look attractive.Everyone today wants to look good and a lot of significance and attention is given to good looking individuals.While it is partly justified for women in the modelling and fashion industry to consume these products as it contributes a lions share to their earning . However, they need to consider the side effects and the consequences that some of the products might pose.Personally, I particularly came across a model.She was advised to consume glutathione sprays and tablets by a certified cosmetologist .There was a tremendous improvement in the skin tone and complexion over a specific period of time.As a consequence,she felt more confident and ready to take on the world.
As much as the numerous other benefits that these widely advertised beauty products may provide, the effect and the impact of them on the health of the people cannot be ignored.In the long run ,some of the tablets might have some side effects which may make the consumer vulnerable .However,it also depends on whether these products were taken orally or applied topically as creams.Some individuals may develop rashes and pigmentation issues on prolonged use .
On continuous use of these products it is highly likely that the pharmaceutical companies have earned huge sums of money.I personally feel that laws must be enforced by the government to regulate e sale of the products so that it has negligible health issues on the consumers , thereby creating a happy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, may, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21383647799 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18912443306 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591194968553 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 45.0 20.2975951904 222% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 131.794057034 49.4020404114 267% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.857142857 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 45.4285714286 20.7667163134 219% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.267713832448 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112655191127 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0283912198875 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155089627355 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0286792289568 0.056905535591 50% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 17.34 50.2224549098 35% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 11.3001002004 195% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.83 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.0 10.1190380762 198% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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