Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why?
Dolphins are fascinating animals. They aren't only intelligent but they're also very friendly. Therefore, they can help people so much such as play with patients, rescue drowning people or perform in the circus,...Children and also their parents are very interested in watching the performance of dolphins: play ball, jump through the hoops, and jump in the air,...But sometimes, they have an accident while training that will make them injured or even they will die.
But I disagree with the opinion of some people that we should stop training dolphins to perform in the circus. Because these instances don't usually happen and we can surmount by more carefully when training them, choose comfortable places to train them. If we stop using dolphins for entertainment, we will lose many abilities of them. Dolphins are our friends, so we have to treat them well, protect and take care of them.
I'm Khanh.I study at Chu Van An high school. My family has 4 members, they are my parents, my younger sister and me.My favorite subject is Math and Physics.
Tet is a holiday in Viet Nam
I very like eating cake and
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- Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why? 56
- Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why? 22
- Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why? 56
- Many people are against training dolphins to perform in the circus because it may injure these animals. Do you agree or disagree? Why? 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 41.998997996 43% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 922.0 1615.20841683 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 189.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87830687831 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66261134493 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.671957671958 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 506.74238477 55% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 93.2557773009 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.2 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201768606737 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787198837909 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0874651499309 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0651415103932 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0811189950172 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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