Many people are working at home rather than in the workplace. Some people believe this will bring benefits to the workers and their families, but others suggest it will cause stress in the home. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Increase in selection of jobs at home instead of going office daily is widely observed nowadays. It has argued by a significant number of individuals that home-based duties are way more beneficial for an employee as well as for his relatives. Although others believe it can have adverse impacts on relationships at home. Before reaching a conclusion, both the ideas will be discussed in the following paragraphs.
Work at home will save time for an employee in travelling for going offices daily and the office breaks, therefore, that time can be utilized with family. Home jobs are less stressed as physically the boss of an employee is not present and worker can organize his work according to his needs. For instance, many computer engineers these days prefer the jobs at home, it give them advantage to spend more time with family and relaxed environment during working hours.
Mixing of home and office can cause impacts both personal and professional life. The discipline and attitude towards duties will be effected, the job performance may also impacted. In some cases, while working alone in home for example, in office the colleague can share details with each other in meetings and discussion, however work from home will be deprived of such valuable needs and it impacts on overall growth of an employee.
In conclusion, while, working at home will involve families in the duties and may have negative impacts on the professional outcome, I believe that time saving in travelling for office can have great benefits for an employee and his family especially, for those who are working in major cities and have to travel long distance to reach office.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 244, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... employee as well as for his relatives. Although others believe it can have adverse impa...
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Line 3, column 371, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'gives'?
Suggestion: gives
... these days prefer the jobs at home, it give them advantage to spend more time with ...
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Line 5, column 436, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pacts on overall growth of an employee. In conclusion, while, working at home wi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as for, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as well as, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03971119134 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64845674635 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.548736462094 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.5225134848 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.909090909 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1818181818 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5454545455 7.06120827912 164% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236869787196 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106366752671 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361804554314 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162579534789 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310554673784 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.25 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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