Some people believe that not all criminals should be kept in prison, but some of them should be allowed to do unpaid work to help the community. Do you agree or disagree?
<p class="MsoNormal"><strong><span style="font-family:"Raleway",serif;mso-bidi-font-family:
"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;color:#1D1D1D;letter-spacing:
1.1pt;background:#FCFCFC">A significant number of people consider that all the
criminals does not deserve to be placed inside jail, they should perform tasks
and help the society without anything to be paid for it. In my opinion, I agree
that some criminals should have an opportunity to improve their life through
community jobs. <o:p></o:p></span></strong></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><strong><span style="font-family:"Raleway",serif;mso-bidi-font-family:
"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;color:#1D1D1D;letter-spacing:
1.1pt;background:#FCFCFC">Volunteer tasks in the community for some offenders
are useful for them as well as for the society in various ways. Working in the
society will improve their skills and allow them to learn new things as well,
which they can use in future after completing their punishments. In addition to
that, different tasks of the society can be completed without any cost of the
government. For instance, cleaning and hygiene activities in jail duration can
help prisoners to obtain jobs in municipality work after completion of their verdict.
<o:p></o:p></span></strong></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><strong><span style="font-family:"Raleway",serif;mso-bidi-font-family:
"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;color:#1D1D1D;letter-spacing:
1.1pt;background:#FCFCFC">Another factor is improvement their social behaviour
and attitude, Working on community level will give them platform to talk and
discuss issues with other workers and daily routine of such activity will enhance
their confidence to work in the society. For example, daily tasks will make
their routine habits and working with others will give team skills and sense of
understanding the difference between right and wrong activities. <o:p></o:p></span></strong></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><strong><span style="font-family:"Raleway",serif;mso-bidi-font-family:
"Times New Roman";mso-bidi-theme-font:minor-bidi;color:#1D1D1D;letter-spacing:
1.1pt;background:#FCFCFC">In conclusion, some law breakers should be given
chance to improve themselves by incorporating them in unpaid community tasks.
In this way, the offender can learn some sort of skills which they can use in
upcoming opportunities as well as improve their behaviour and understanding as
well as the society will also develop with such approach.<o:p></o:p></span></strong></p>
<p class="MsoNormal"><b><span style="font-family:"Raleway",serif;color:#1D1D1D;
letter-spacing:1.1pt;background:#FCFCFC"><o:p> </o:p></span></b></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, well, as for, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, sort of, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2665.0 1615.20841683 165% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 9.00337837838 5.12529762239 176% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 13.7166950888 2.80592935109 489% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523648648649 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 671.4 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 2.3 1.60771543086 143% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 153.063516228 49.4020404114 310% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 266.5 106.682146367 250% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.6 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 34.0 4.38176352705 776% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0979555285516 0.244688304435 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629427506718 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043298059957 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0380020569859 0.151304729494 25% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541531849787 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 35.8 13.0946893788 273% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -17.18 50.2224549098 -34% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.9 11.3001002004 203% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 35.51 12.4159519038 286% => Coleman_liau_index is high.
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 36.0 10.7795591182 334% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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