Many people are working longer hours.
Why is this happening?
What problems can this cause to people?
Lately number of working times in some sectors is increasing, where some employees are spending most of their duration working extra hours. Several reasons are leading to this long working time, but apparently this will cause a lot of problems for the individual.
On one hand, many reasons that allow the workers to spend most of their moment at work. The number of nation market and the demand on items increased, therefore some are obliged to operate for long, to full fill the market needs, and at the same time they benefit by doing extra pocket money. Secondly, money wise is the main issue, where people are putting themselves under pressure, due to the payments they had, like rents, loans and to satisfy their family requirements. For instance, due to the Covid Pandemic, the economic system world-wide is all affected, and humans are trying to work for more period, in order to secure their daily needs.
On the other hand, a lot of work will lead to difficulties in person life. First, health problems will increase such as, back shoulders pain, lack of sleep, stress, and body weakness if the work environment require physical exertion. Moreover, some people being far from their family, this will impact negatively in the relation between the dependents. Addition to that, the person will not be active anymore in his job and this will cause lack in their performance and energy. For example, some companies’ rules, will not allow their staff to work more than 8 hours per day for 5 days a week and sometime are flexible by giving the opportunity to work from home, where the employee will be more effective and motivated.
As a conclusion, human being must work to live, but in an awareness way, not harming himself and around. So, I believe, to avoid all this problems, men/women should schedule their job and have more free time for themselves to enjoy it and rest.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 134, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...and around. So, I believe, to avoid all this problems, men/women should schedule the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1571.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.8487654321 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4309920243 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58950617284 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.843185242 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.846153846 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9230769231 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190229697315 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0729595044779 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614752750312 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11985622403 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0560098247453 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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