Many people argue that society is becoming less and less polite. What is your opinion?
Lots of individuals believe that unique morals and esteems among people have become extremely low these days due to various changes in their life style. In fact, this is a very controversial issue as it technically depends on the acquired attitude as well as rules in their nations. This essay aims to explore such a debatable issue in further detail before to a conclusion.
On one hand, there is no doubt that a plethora of countries impose very strict measurements in order to maintain high level of ethics between individuals. The USA for example, has set several rigorous regulations in order to overcome many society's challenges such as discrimination. these essential principles have ensure a peaceful coexistence between their citizens and residents. therefore, individuals are forced to respect each others' faiths. In contrast, it's irrefutable that some people breakdown the rules there. However, they will be convicted for such reasons.
On the other hand, plenty of people are being susceptible by the surrounded environment. For instance, Syria is listed as one of the most corruption nation across the world. People indeed, bribe each other in terms of finalizing some illegal issues. Therefore, the crime level in such places will drastically increase as most of their citizens can easily breakdown the rules with no legal actions by their authorities. Moreover, some given services such as education, healthcare, and transportation will definitely being suffered from such situation.
To sum up, it's very difficult to say the ethics are almost gone from our communities, as there are many countries place extremely tough measurements in order to ensure a high quality of life. On the contrary, undoubtedly, there are many nations need to enhance their rules against corruption as it's affecting their growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hey will be convicted for such reasons. On the other hand, plenty of people are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, in contrast, in fact, no doubt, such as, as well as, on the contrary, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1545.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34602076125 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.918979952 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584775086505 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6413609756 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5625 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0625 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5625 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0687238593296 0.244688304435 28% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0228397945575 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280046267843 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0427381553486 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00761907552866 0.056905535591 13% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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