Many people believe that family has a greater influence on a child’s life and development compared to other factors, such as friends, TV, music and so on. Do you agree or disagree with this statement?
In today's competitive era, family bonding works as fuel in the development of children. Although major portion of populace opine that family plays a pivotal role in child's development, for the holistic development of child several another factors such as kin, television,music are indispensable. I partiality believe with notion. In this essay, I shall delve into arguments of how all other aspects are affected in growth of child to support my opinion.
Commence with, family effects on the overall growth of children. Lovable family foster the foundation of ethics which helps child to be responsible adult later. Inherited characteristics are genetically passed down in brat. Besides, parents can set up examples for their children as they are the role model of their off spring. Children feel the sense of belonging, sense of worthiness while they live with family. In family, there are several other relations for example, sibling, cousin, all this relationship teach one that how can make sustainable relationship that helps them further in their social life.
Nonetheless, importance of family is sufficient for the betterment of child's growth, without any doubt, pal, television, and music have significant impact on thorough development of one. Friends are crucial i life with whom they can share their all sorts of emotion. In many survey it has been proven that children feel more confident if they surrounded by their friends. In the era of globalization, in most of families, both parents are busy in work and not available for their children. In such time friends, television and music give them condolences and help them not to stray away. Moreover, music soothe one's mind and soul and many pursue music as a career if one has talent and determination.
To recapitulate, I pen down saying that, in this global village, family is not enough for the holistic development of children. However, parents should always take care of the quality of television shows, friends and taught them discipline. In the early age, parents reinforce the base with right behavior and sacraments while in teenager and later years another factors are considering more inevitable for growth.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 271, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , music
... another factors such as kin, television,music are indispensable. I partiality believe...
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Line 5, column 271, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun survey seems to be countable; consider using: 'many surveys'.
Suggestion: many surveys
...an share their all sorts of emotion. In many survey it has been proven that children feel m...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the families') or simply say ''most families''.
Suggestion: most of the families; most families
...riends. In the era of globalization, in most of families, both parents are busy in work and not ...
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Line 5, column 491, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...k and not available for their children. In such time friends, television and music...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, so, while, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1842.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24786324786 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87090442035 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581196581197 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.6042229662 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9473684211 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4736842105 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187937215068 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583589692485 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375917602325 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118924222122 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490632924038 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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