Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
People have spectrum of opinions regarding tourism. some deem it as a negative happening for their nations because of contamination occurs by tourism to the host country. There are several remedies that should be considered to change the mind-set people for foreign travelling.
The primary reason that compels men and women to think global tourism as a bad occurence is that tourists, who visit various places, throw litter anywhere without any second thoughts. Consequently, tourist destinations become polluting which is one of the rudimentary cause to unwelcome it. Moreover, damage to the eco-system and sometimes, to the environment is done by people unknowingly. To exemplify, in India, Taj-mahal is popular due to its magnificent architectural monuments, however, due to international tourism, it has became a polluted place because of debris spreaded by tourists. Therefore, these could be the reason that few people reckon it as a harmful evolution.
To tackle this situation, government should spread awareness about the benefits of international tourism to their citizens. As foreign tourists assist to generate revenue in international currency, it helps to flourish the economy of the country world-wide. Secondly, people spend money of different goods and services when they visit tourist destinations, it boosts the local economy. To exemplify, Daheradun is a famous hill station where people flee from all over the world for vacation, hotel business and food industries are in demand which render employment to thousand of people. Hence, by guiding citizens about the affirmative side of the international tourism, attitude will be altered.
To recapitulate, though some people are not in the favour of global tourism, mind-set of them can be changed by making them aware about the benefits of it. Furthermore, it is recommended that authority should circumspect all the facets of global tourism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, as for
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1628.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5186440678 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03516496615 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606779661017 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.0606056133 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.533333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.13333333333 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.332518858331 0.244688304435 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0972885373631 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594756303248 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187657057879 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558475313651 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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