Many people believe that today’s society is becoming less and less polite. What is you opinion on this?
Nowadays, people think that society is turning more impolite. I agree with this opinion and also think people are becoming less tolerant. This essay will discuss the reasons why I think this and provide some examples.
In big cities where we have many people using the public transportation it is very common to see some people not respecting a person with special needs and they do not wait their turn to get in the bus, they push people and think it is normal. I have seen many times people not waiting for a person using a wheelchair to get on the bus, the driver needs to stop people who are getting in otherwise the person who is using the wheelchair will be the last one and this situation will make him feel bad.
People are not respecting even the nature, I am tired of seeing a lot of rubbish on the beach and in the playgrounds, and this is a terrible example for the kids. Every time I go to the beach with my daughter, we see a lot of plastic cups and bottles on the sand and we start to take these things to put into the bin so do they not go into the sea to pollute the marine life. When we are playing at the playground, we use to do the same with some rubbish to keep the place clean for others kids to play.
In conclusion, I think people are living their individual lives and they are forgetting we are sharing the same place, environment and world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 419, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...en we are playing at the playground, we use to do the same with some rubbish to kee...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1124.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.30651340996 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28455324116 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.509578544061 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 348.3 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 69.1744975487 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.888888889 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172215837021 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088808986227 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939765004806 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108837293018 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0974732883836 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.31 12.4159519038 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.43 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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