many people do sports as kids but gives up physical exercise as adults.
why adults give up exercise?
what can be done to solve this problem?
Physical work out is essential to maintain a healthy life style. Despite that, a lot of people who used to do sports as children quit exercising when they grow up. This essay will analyze some of the reasons for this worrying issue, as well as propose solutions that may trigger people to exercise more often.
To begin with, quitting working out as adults has a number of reasons; firstly , beyond a shadow of a doubt, kids are more active and energetic than adults. Also, children consider sports a game that they enjoy doing. , therefore working out is extremely exciting for them. Secondly, as people grow older, their life gets busier and they have less time to exercise. Take for example, when an adult gets married, not only he spends a lot of time at work, but also he has to spare time for his family obligations. Finally, some people are not aware of the healthy benefits of physical exercise.
Nevertheless, there are potential ways to solve this problem. Primarily, the media has a great role in promoting physical exercising with all its concomitant health benefits. For instance, exercising can cure many debilitating diseases such as diabetes. Furthermore, more television programs and talk shows should emphasize exercising and entice people to do it more. Another important measure that should be taken, more social events that include games and physical activities for adults should be held, also, if the winners' prizes are enticing enough, more individuals will be encouraged to participate and compete to win.
To conclude, it is evident that there are several causes of adults quitting doing sports, of most importance, is lack of time and energy. However, if people became aware of hoe working out is beneficial to one's health, it would prevent this problem from deteriorating.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07046979866 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63626629914 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.614093959732 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.6660330986 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.4375 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.625 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.266200817543 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080125209513 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525315824526 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153939194523 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0662072822985 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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