Many people live in the outskirts when they go for holiday do you think it is good or bad?
It is ubiquitously known that vacations play a significant role in one's life whether they are employees or students. Spending this time in suburbs has been a mood issue since last several decades. A section of society favours this practice while others are more suspicious about its repercussions. To my mind, it is obviously a positive approach for a plethora of reasons, elucidated in upcoming segments.
First and foremost advantages of spending short time in outskirts is that such holidays are meant to relax, refresh, revitalize and rejuvenate a person. To be more precise, one can enjoy a stress free life as it keeps them away from hustle and bustle of life where one feels completely relaxed. Not only this but it also breaks the monotony of life. A human being easily gets exasperated from hectic schedule. As such, they can have some enjoyable moments to reboot themselves.
Likewise, enjoying vacations in outskirts detoxify the soul since many activities take place in resorts, for example, massage, spa swimming and so on and gives the rich diet also. What is more, when people go with families can spend quality time with one another. Thus, love and attention are maintained among them.
However, some believe that by spending holidays in isolated places, individuals can get cannot explore different places and is confined to one place only. Also, it and incurse huge cost when they are in suburbs. Nevertheless, wealth is of no importance if people do not have time for themselves and to enjoy the precious time away from the tensions and worries.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that although holidays in outskirts have limited drawbacks yet pros overweigh the cons in terms of getting relaxed, beautiful moments to recall, health benefits and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, so, thus, while, for example, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1489.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0819112628 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71860517616 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651877133106 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5445514754 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0625 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3125 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162023995165 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0450478014937 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423384752949 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0864477861963 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449888509842 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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