These days marriages are taking place by online matrimonial ads. is it good or bad?
Gone are the days when minute intricacies were probed before getting into marital knots. However, eversince the globalisation took place this trend has undergone a sea change as one can easily find suitable match on internet. To my mind, this is obviously a negative approach owning to several reasons, elucidated in the subsequent paragraphs.
One serious problem that arises from finding partner online is that sometimes people are kept under dark. To be more precise, people make fake profiles and naive individuals become victim of frauds as accurate details are not mentioned such as age, job status and many more; consequently, one cannot rely on such applications. Not only this but also people can not observe each others' likings and dislikings since couple is not known to each others as well as families for long which may end up with divorce.
However, some believe that it is an era of jealousy where one can not get support from kith and kin and matrimonial sites come as saviuor during right time of marriage as well as it gives the option to chose the people according to their choice. Nevertheless, internet does not guarantee if the chosen partner will be perfect or not. In this case, one should opt for finding match online only, where they can probe their backgrounds and can get satisfaction of their priorities.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that although it is an epoch of technology where everything is done on internet yet finding life partner on websites is not a wise idea as it is a very pertinent decision which should be taken meticulously otherwise it may ruin one's entire life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 6, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'is'.
Suggestion: is
Gone are the days when minute intricacies were p...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to partner'
Suggestion: to partner
...ternet does not guarantee if the chosen partner will be perfect or not. In this case, o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92335766423 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67777779129 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.9033127044 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0592426749473 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0231030384788 0.084324248473 27% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0241146631181 0.0667982634062 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.03235821922 0.151304729494 21% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242226037582 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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