most people accept that we live in a globalised world but not everyone agrees that is this is beneficial to what extent is globalisation of positive or negative development
Globalisation has taken Mammoth dimension in every Walk of human life since last few decades. A section of society considers it a positive turn while others are more suspicious about its repercussions. To my mind, it is obviously favourable for people for several reasons, elucidated in upcoming paragraphs.
First and foremost benefit of globalisation is that it has enhanced international trade. To be more precise, import and export system has uplifted the economy of nation as it generates excellent revenue for the government which further improves the level of country. It also paves the way to employment since plethora of jobs vistas have opened. By this one can fulfill their desires and lead a luxurious lifestyle as well. Not only this but also due to globalisation the the improved version of facilities can be observed. To elaborate, one can enjoy amenities like medical, education and many more. Academic institutions, for instance, in past were not future and career oriented; their main motive was to make the children able to read and write only whereas in present scenario, pupils are more advanced and concerned regarding their professions.
Likewise technology has made the international communication very easy. By this I mean, one can make voice or face call in few seconds which has reduced the gap between foreigners. what is more, global tourism is common these days owning to globalisation as distances are no more barrier. Individuals can afford travelling one to another country because of less air fares. A survey conducted in USA by international migrants organisation, for example, revealed that 79% people of total world travel at international level each year due to increased globalisation.
However, globalisation affects the life. A section of society is still suffering from starvation therefore they do not have nothing to do with technology as they do not have manual jobs in in terms of carpenter, painter, mechanics and so on. As everything is done by machines. nevertheless, machines guarantee the accuracy and proficiency therefore these are time and energy saving. Hence, it is very easy for people to do the tasks easily by depending on machines.
To recapitulate, I vehemently vouch that although globalisation has brought some drawbacks along with merits, however benefits are far more than that of disadvantages in terms of global trade and and tourism, improved version of facilities, technology and so on.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, likewise, nevertheless, regarding, second, so, still, therefore, well, whereas, while, as to, for example, for instance, i mean, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2072.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 392.0 315.596192385 124% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28571428571 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.44960558625 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07163196831 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 176.041082164 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602040816327 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 685.8 506.74238477 135% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.3353667217 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6666666667 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52380952381 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.124508446645 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037560036494 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0418441467077 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.065999940842 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0178537635945 0.056905535591 31% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 122.0 78.4519038076 156% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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