Many people say that cooking and eating at home is better for the individual and the family than eating out in restaurants or canteens. Do you agree or disagree?
In the modern era, people don’t have time to spend on Cooking their food at home and prefer to eat out regularly. Most people have an opinion that Preparing homemade food is much better for the individual and the family. Though some may be of the opinion that eating out is a better option than having food from home. This essay will argue that why it is best to cook and eat at home for everyone.
People nowadays have an opinion that eating out at restaurants or canteens is a good option than home cooking. Being busy with the day to day work makes them weary and they think that eating their breakfast or meal outside will save some time to relax. As a result, they will get adopted to a daily routine of having their food at restaurants or cafeteria in their workplace or neighborhood. For instance, people who work after hours and in the night shifts will feel convenient by ordering their meal online and getting delivered at their office. Over a period of time, they become habituated to it as its readily available. Thus having the food outside will benefit the individual in the short run, though it has some negative effects in the longer time.
Even though eating out regularly outside in restaurants is beneficial, Many will not prefer to do that and will opt for home cooked food. It is always good to prepare and have the food at home, as it will be free of adulterants and freshly made with consideration of health. Is there a guarantee that the restaurants or food courts which serve food maintain the quality standards? A survey by Health and diet magazine outlines that, eating food outside in restaurants regularly will increase the chance of stomach disorders including colon cancer. Considering the health of the individual and the family, it is always better to cook and having the food at home, which will also aid in maintaining a healthy diet.
In conclusion, although it seems that eating out in restaurants and hotels is a convenient and quicker option, it definitely has its negative effects on health. Thus eating food prepared at home is always best for individual and the family as a whole.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 227, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Though” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tter for the individual and the family. Though some may be of the opinion that eating ...
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Line 1, column 308, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
...ting out is a better option than having a food from home. This essay will argue that w...
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Line 2, column 553, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...tting delivered at their office. Over a period of time, they become habituated to it as its re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, thus, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1763.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.72654155496 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52702547062 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.455764075067 0.561755894193 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 548.1 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.0529652289 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 103.705882353 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9411764706 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.82352941176 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.340837360734 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13830612088 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984382795128 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.251900440114 0.151304729494 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07291677638 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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