Many people say that globalization and the growing number of multinational companies have a negative effect on the environment. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Use specific reasons and examples to support your position
Over the past decade researchers are discovering alarming results on climate change and its effects on the environment. In my point of view, rise of industries globally may be the contributing factor towards the exploitation of the environment. However, this essay partially agrees to the given statement and will also discuss on other factors leading to adverse environmental issues.
Companies penetrating the global market has been an evident strategy in business development. On the contrary they fail to see the negatives caused because of globalization. For example, the direct root cause for deforestation is construction of industries. Moreover, the effluents from these companies are mostly toxic and are let out freely into the atmosphere leading to an unimaginable effect to the nature.
On the other hand, the use of modern-day technologies in our day today life is undoubtedly a major factor owing to climatic change. For instance, the use of regular hole appliance such as air conditioner and refrigerator are prime source of carbon mono oxide which is highly poisonous to the atmosphere. In additions, there is an exponential increase in the use of automobiles which is also a reason for pollution.to be more specific in countries like china the pollution created by automobiles are beyond the safe limit thereby forcing the people to wear safety face mask for protection.
In conclusion, Globalization and the spread of companies around the word are indeed the reason for global warning, nevertheless in my opinion every individual is also equally responsible for exploiting the environment. Therefore, it is a collective action to be taken by each one of us to prevent the degradation of the nature.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1462.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35531135531 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18239346587 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626373626374 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.9295373442 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.833333333 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0833333333 7.06120827912 214% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.138033602718 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0431943253723 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0263872617464 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766117929921 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0113730749544 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.93 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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