Parents want to achieve balance between family and career but only a few manage to achieve it. What do you think is the reason? Discuss possible solutions and provide examples
It is a constant struggle to maintain an equilibrium between family and profession especially for people who have children. With a steady economical rise, it has become a tedious task for every individual to meet the ends. Therefore, to attain financial stability one must spend more time at work. This essay will discuss the reason for such imbalance and will also discuss some solutions to counter it.
Firstly, being a working parent, it is a huge responsibility which demands equal focus both at work place and home. For a smooth and peaceful living, it is necessary to have a perfect work-life balance. Unfortunately, not many are able to hack this. One of the primary reasons is that the cost of living has increased to a level where it is impossible to survive without performing overtime or having a dual source of income. Subsequently one must give more of their time in making money and naturally the time spend with family tend to decrease.
This problem can be solved only by making a better economical situation in the country. The authorities must be aware of the financial capability of the people and must ease the cost for certain mandatory things. On the other hand, the companies should allow their employees especially those who are parenting to work from home. For instance, many software companies in western countries allows their employees to work full time from home, hence giving them the opportunity to have a proper balance.
In conclusion, it is important to succeed in both professional life and family life and it is possible only by making certain reforms in the society. Therefore, this essay discussed some problems relating to maintaining a work like balance and also stated some solutions, if implemented wisely one can achieve a state of equilibrium in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Subsequently,
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
... one can achieve a state of equilibrium in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, hence, if, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1518.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04318936877 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77422762089 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568106312292 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.5480940587 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.2 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111281478696 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0335790167949 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0397550461242 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0723509991662 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.043072829544 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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