Many people think that more money would make them more happier.
How money is important for happiness?
In this materialistic world,money has become an indispensable part of everyone's life.The large portion of people in society believe that being wealthier is the source of happiness and contentment.This essay will discuss the significance of money for delightful existence.
To begin with,it is undeniable fact that to have a happy life the basic necessities of food,shelter and clothes need to be fulfilled.Thus,money acts as an essential source for the fulfillment of these requirements.In the similar way,the exaggerating possession of materials provide happiness to people.In the recent survey conducted by The Hindu,it was found that 70% of people feel more contended and superior to own the most expensive products.Moreover,the organisation of grand weddings,birthday parties,festival eves is made possible only because of money.
Additionally,the provision of financial support to growing children help them to achieve their desires and goals which ultimately bring joy to their lives.Furthermore,with the growth of modernization,following the latest fashion has become a common trend among today's generation and spending money on lavish clothes,branded accessories and expensive vehicles make them happy.Not only happiness but money can also bring the feeling of satisfaction which generally comes when it is spent on the education of children,providing assistance to needy,arranging medical help for ill person and for any other noble cause.
In conclusion,it can be stated that money brings cheerfulness to life but only when it is being utilized in a productive manner.Therefore,to understand the true worth and value of money there is need to generate awareness among society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 247.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.87449392713 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.05468770516 2.80592935109 145% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.643724696356 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 61.0 20.2975951904 301% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.21619274 49.4020404114 341% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 362.75 106.682146367 340% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 61.75 20.7667163134 297% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.75 7.06120827912 308% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250621995919 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141173376561 0.084324248473 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302279536692 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141173376561 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0302279536692 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.1 13.0946893788 283% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.36 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 18.2 7.44779559118 244% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 29.4 11.3001002004 260% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.65 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.84 8.58950901804 138% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 30.5 9.78957915832 312% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 26.4 10.1190380762 261% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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