Many people try to look younger than their age. What are the reasons people do this?
Do you think this is a good thing or a bad thing?
Nowadays, people are trying to change their body image in order to appear younger. Everybody knows the effect of age on their appear and they try to make a better and younger body shape while they age is growing, that they seem younger. These changes are related to many factors and in my opinion this trend is negative. This essay shed some light on this argument from both sides and extend my partial support to the latter view before arriving at conclusion.
Individuals should accept what they are and they should try to become better not to change them generally to what they are not. I believe that, in each age people can have the excellent appearance related to their age with doing some activities. As exemplify, with playing sports, do not smoke, healthy diet, do not drink alcoholic beverage and finally wear tailored cloths. Moreover, because of many plastic surgery advertising in magazines or TV, people be thinking to change their appear and make a fake face themselves. Experience shows that in many cases persons faced with irreparable injury that they endanger their health and of course they throw out their money. Furthermore, humans from the day that they born until when they want to leave this world follow one process which appeared with changes in people’s body and face. It is not natural if some person is 50 but his/her face seems 30 years old, but can be 50 and have a well appearance. It is more acceptable than have fake face.
On the other hand, some people think differently. The first reason that they want to change their appear is psychically. As a matter of fact, they think with younger appearance could overcome to problems, meanwhile, they improve their self-confident with new face. Additionally, some people have any defect on their face, it may be inherent or because of some accident. They try to keep their face younger than their age that are seemed better to hide their defect.
At the conclusion, I believe that it is a negative point for who change their appear and make a not real face. People are very beautiful with each face and body shape if they have kind heart.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 716, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[1]
Message: Possible grammatical error. You used a past participle without using any required verb ('be' or 'have'). Did you mean 'bore'?
Suggestion: bore
...thermore, humans from the day that they born until when they want to leave this worl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, of course, as a matter of fact, in many cases, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 53.0 24.0651302605 220% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1771.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79945799458 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42282182261 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.514905149051 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.9 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.916917615 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2105263158 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4210526316 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84210526316 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25034163199 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0919874565645 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508539761416 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165246223199 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0631771688591 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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