Many people try to look younger than they really are. What are the reasons for that? Is it a positive or negative development?
Nowadays almost everybody wants to look younger than actual age. I believe it is due to extensive influence of social media on our lives and alluring marketing campaigns of cosmetics industry. As far as my perspective is concerned, it is a negative trend.
Firstly, social media plays an important role in shaping trends of the future and one of these trends is effort to look beautiful and young, because websites such as Facebook and Instagram are mainly based on sharing photos and videos of personal life, and everybody wants to be praised for his or her looks. That is the one reason people are struggling to maintain their looks. Furthermore, cosmetic industry takes advantage of this and comes up with attractive advertisements for their products, which ensure to keep people young, take example of cosmetic surgery which is becoming increasingly popular even in developing countries like Pakistan. Both are main factors to compel people to look younger.
Whether it is a good or bad thing? An answer to this question is not as simple as it seems, since some people may argue that it is personal matter and good looks may help in number of ways. However, the way people spend millions, merely on their looks, makes it a negative development. In developing countries like Pakistan, where a lot needs to be done in education and health sector, such extravagance should not be practiced. Moreover, most companies make false claims about efficacy and safety of their products and put the health of consumers at risk. For instance, some products have been reported to cause skin allergies.
In conclusion, the race to maintain young looks is influenced by the social media and greed of cosmetic companies, which makes it a negative development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, may, moreover, so, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03436426117 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7257120223 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59793814433 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.4326567188 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.642857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7857142857 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183744775334 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641321165865 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0514067381003 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104316061318 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0270663154446 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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