Some people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others Say that there are more important environmental problems.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Due to climate change, humanity is facing a lot of challenges. There are certain people, who argue that lose of natural flora and fauna, due to extreme weather condition is the chief issue, while others believe that there are many other challenges of foremost importance, such as rising sea levels, flash floods, and cyclones, as compared to mere loss of certain kinds of animals or plants.
Change in weather conditions is, definitely, leading to lose of certain kind of plants and animals, which can have a negative effect on biodiversity and in turn can affect the food chain, adversely. For instance, according to some studies a complete extinction of honey bee can render our planet unlivable. Moreover, there are some plants, which has medicinal importance and lose of such species can hinder the research for cure of certain diseases. However, all these drawbacks may take decades to have any meaningful impact on our lives.
On the other hand, climate change is causing global warming, which is resulting in more crucial issues such as flash floods, rising sea levels, and cyclones. Flash floods are destroying villages every year and eroding fertile lands. Take the example of flood of 2010 in Pakistan, which wrecked a havoc on, at least, one fourth of the country. Furthermore, rising temperature is main cause of melting the glaciers on poles and raising the sea level. Now we are facing more cyclones in our coastal areas than ever and these storms are destroying our shore line.
In conclusion, I believe, due to their destructive nature, natural disasters are much more serious environmental concerns than extinction of certain types of plants or animals over the period several decades.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, while, at least, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1434.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12142857143 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58606943102 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610714285714 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.9816095118 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.132902005708 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426053870109 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0306430811486 0.0667982634062 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0725954248329 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019813249946 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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