Nowadays there is an increasing trend of big shopping centres opening up while small shops are closing down. What are the advantages and disadvantages of big shopping centres versus small local shops?
These days a rapid growth in chains of international shopping malls has been observed, while, on the other hand, small neighbourhood shops are closing down. As far as my prespective is concerned, mega shopping malls have benefits of greater range of products and lucrative promotional schemes. However, these shopping centres are less accessible as compared to local shops and also effect local economy, adversely.
these shopping centres are part of international chains, which can import products from around the world and offer a wide range of goods to their customers as compared to small shops. Moreover these malls offer attractive discount schemes to lure their buyers and in this way helps to reduce the groccery bill. For instance, Hyperstar in pakistan is always offering discount on their products in pakistan. In this way, these shopping centres are helping their customers.
On the other hand, most shopping cetres are far from residential areas, while local shops are situated on walking distance, therefore, shopping malls are less accessible as compared to small shops. Furthermore, small shops are managed and owned by local population and support local economy of a town, while shopping malls are part of multinational chains and are mostly concentrated in major urban centres, which can be pernicious to local economy.
In conclusion, big shopping centres are helping a great deal in bringing a wide range of products to us and reduce our expense, though they are less accessible than small shops and also have deleterious effects on native economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, moreover, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.312 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71630337039 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4429800772 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.8 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.6 7.06120827912 150% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.411481671205 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.18452468868 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11148645453 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273988826169 0.151304729494 181% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0895212505111 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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