Many people like to wear fashionable clothes. Why do you think this is the case? Is this a good thing or a bad thing?
I am in favour of fashionable clothes and strongly believe that it is a good thing. Fashion has been in existence since the times when humans decided to clothe themselves. Initially, it was more in terms of protection and comfort with respect to climatic conditions. Over time, it was one of the ways in which the elite distinguished themselves from the common man.
Today, fashion is an expression of a person’s cultural, religious, and social identity. We can identify the socio-economic background of a person based on their fashion style. Various global brands have benefited financially by specifically targeting certain demographics. Fashion has become a statement for individuals and expresses your inner self.
Over time, fashion styles of individuals in certain roles have created stereotypes. For example, the US President is expected to wear a dark blue suit as the President of the United States of America is supposed to represent power. There was a big debate on social media when President Obama wore a beige suit at a Press conference in the initial period of his first term.
To me, fashion is about using your clothes to stand out from a crowd. I want my fashion style to depict that I am chic, in tune with the latest trends. To me fashion is a business tool that enables me to create a positive influence on my clients, especially as I transact more with high-net-worth individuals.
To conclude, fashion is a good thing, if you can use it to your advantage, either to leverage your business or upscale your self-esteem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, for example, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1289.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95769230769 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98154828529 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607692307692 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3978101315 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.9333333333 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146460134958 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0508056963439 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0624982147643 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0811392361405 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414650079949 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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