In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
There is an opinion that society should protect the countryside from the construction of new houses despite the fact that it is only space available for building. From my point of view, even though the protection of the environment is important, providing accommodation is a necessity and it should be approached as a priority.
First, there are plenty of places around the earth, where people live in unbearable conditions and slums. There is no need to say that all of them need a place to live and building affordable real estate is one of the major tasks, which the government should solve. As we know, modern cities are overcrowded, there is not enough space for new houses, and the countryside became the only option for construction.
Second, building new houses in a country does not exclude its protection. This is because, nowadays, it is possible to use eco-friendly materials and embed new habitats into the environment. For example, I have read an article about Green cities, where an author suggested planting different plants on the roofs. It could be trees, flowers, or even vegetables. As well as, there should be plantations of trees on the streets.
In conclusion, I think that despite the fact that it is an important issue of the protection of the countryside, human lives are more important. As the only space is available in the countryside, we do not have a choice and should build new houses there.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, well, for example, i think, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1193.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92975206612 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8784098899 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561983471074 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 367.2 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.055788726 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4166666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.318228788319 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0992601078654 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.082423638603 0.0667982634062 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.181907506336 0.151304729494 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0457992617857 0.056905535591 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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