In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion about this?
A majority of the population wants to settle down in the cities today. However, the population has increased so rapidly in the city that it has led to the crunch of construction places. This essay will discuss the views about settling down in the city versus countryside.
In the last couple of decades, people have migrated to metro cities in a large scale. One of the major reasons for this was the abundance of opportunities in cities that so many people have transferred from smaller cities to the bigger, more developed ones. The migration is trending in such a way that the builders are now moving on to the outskirts to build apartments and residences to accommodate so many people. The areas that were barren once have now become fully residential with all the facilities that the metros provide.
Even though it seems essential that the un-used space in the country be utilized, one can foresee many disadvantages in the long-run. Firstly, the building construction is expanding day-by-day leading to cutting of trees and plants. This, consequently, impacts the environment and the weather. As an illustration, Bangalore was once called the City of Greens and it was able to maintain a pleasant weather the whole year, until a majority of the population migrated here and started deforestation in order to build their houses. Secondly, the agriculture in the village area will be badly hampered and eventually affect the crops, vegetation and farmers. Lastly, as the human population increases, the villages will be polluted all the time because of the automobiles, construction activities, waste from industries etc.
Therefore, in order to save our environment, people should avoid migrating to the countryside for their selfish reasons and be considerate to the Mother Nature. In my opinion, I strongly recommend dwelling in the cities and prevent our villages from the daily-hassles of the metropolitan atmosphere.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, however, lastly, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1627.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21474358974 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9892954292 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564102564103 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3345864485 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.466666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120894991191 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0384140379916 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0310765997559 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0694842662689 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0147662412912 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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