In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion?
it is a very well known fact that there is no enough space to build houses in the cities due to highly increased population among the city. Because of this reason people tend to find an alternative locations such as countryside for constructing buildings. but it is really essential to protect countryside. In my opinion I strongly agree with this statements. this essay will discuss why it is needed to save countryside rather than utilizing the available spaces for constructions.
Firstly people need to consider the high bio diversity which is in the countryside. this can be imbalanced within a short time period due to the construction process. For an instance, farmers who live in countryside are used to cultivate lot of food variations by considering the bio diversity. but cutting down lot of trees for building houses can lead a problem of their harvesting process.Hence,it is a clear fact that countryside should be saved in a proper way.
Secondly air pollution and water pollution would be increased due to the human activities while constructing houses. For an example, various type of machines need to be operated in order to build houses in countryside. people may put machinery oils to the without considering the environment. Not only that, unbearable noise would be generated due to heavy machines. Therefore countryside should be protected by saving natural beauty with calm and quite environment.
In conclusion, countryside spaces is not only allowed to people.it is the assets of animals also. By considering these facts, I strongly believe that countryside should be protected as much as possible. However people should find an alternative way to their housing needs without damaging the environment.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, may, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24100719424 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0979911715 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575539568345 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.8623137996 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.7058823529 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3529411765 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.17647058824 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178112486375 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601545582182 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0344215797848 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116070686273 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0310937424686 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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