You work at home and have a problem with a piece of equipment that you use for your job.
Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter.
• Describe the problem with the equipment
• Explain how this problem is affecting your work
• Say what you want the shop or company to do
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding a computer item which I have bought from your shop last month. Let me explain in more detail.
I have bought a “Toshiba’ wireless mouse which was cost me around $200 with the 12 months warranty period. But unfortunately it is not working as expected. It doesn’t connect to my desktop properly and gives a connection error. Since I am working from home, it is really important for me to connect to the machine within few seconds for my office calls. But I was unable to connect very fast due to this connection error and it led me some office related problems as well.
As you are one of leading company for computer equipment, it would be better if you can looking into this matter and replace me a better device at your earliest.
I am looking forward to hear from you soon.
Your sincerely,
Rekha Stephan
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 15, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... explain in more detail. I have bought a 'Toshiba' wireless mouse whic...
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Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'look'
Suggestion: look
...quipment, it would be better if you can looking into this matter and replace me a bette...
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Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to hearing'.
Suggestion: to hearing
...at your earliest. I am looking forward to hear from you soon. Your sincerely, Rekha ...
^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou soon. Your sincerely, Rekha Stephan
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, regarding, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 159.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.69182389937 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85282353332 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654088050314 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.1195186445 44.8134815571 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.6 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 4.34317383033 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215841349295 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719725642345 0.0766984524023 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449872090942 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116518911845 0.12726935374 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414100125006 0.0580467560999 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.63 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.