In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion?
Presently the problem of living space has risen into prominence in many places around the world. There is absolutely no way to build new houses in some cities and a lot of people suggest to carry out construction in the countryside. However, it is a heavily debatable topic introducing frequent debates.
Opponents of urbanization of formal rural areas state that it would cause a dramatic effect on the natural ecosystem of such places. The most drastic consequences are caused by infrastructure that essentially follows any human settlement – that’s, roads, power lines, means of water supply, and such. The construction of these engineering comes results in the destruction of natural biomes of ponds, rivers, and forests, causing many animals to migrate or go extinct. The arguments of environmentalists do make sense, but there are also valuable ideas supporting the countryside occupation.
First of all not even the most extreme supporters of spreading urbanization, maintain that all of the countryside should be filled with homes all over the place. In fact, there are smart illustrations of even larger cities even though not harmonical with nearby nature, but at least in some form of co-operation. Having a considerable amount of parks inside the inhabited area helps both people to feel themselves better and plants and animals to have some sort of home. If I may, to present an example, the city of Zaporizhia where I live has a large island between the ports of the city which is covered with trees and largely unoccupied, being a nice counterpart to heavily populated nearby districts.
In conclusion, I wish to stress that whereas opponents of country settlements have several valid points, things aren’t as forceful as they portray it, and also the co-existence of the human population with nature is quite possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 180, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'suggest carrying'.
Suggestion: suggest carrying
...uses in some cities and a lot of people suggest to carry out construction in the countryside. Ho...
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Line 3, column 474, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... many animals to migrate or go extinct. The arguments of environmentalists do make ...
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Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...f spreading urbanization, maintain that all of the countryside should be filled with homes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, whereas, as for, at least, in conclusion, in fact, sort of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21812080537 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01866481778 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657718120805 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4135995396 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.583333333 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8333333333 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123910414644 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0407288990865 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531409292299 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0675590606508 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0620404250178 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.