In many places new homes are needed, but the only spaces available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there.
What is your opinion above this?
In this modern generation there is a lot of developments are occurring by constructing living apartments, office spaces, and shopping malls etc. in many places. By erection those buildings leads to reduce the land in the cities. The only area is available in the countryside. some people in now-a-days trying to agree that volume and they moving to set up the buildings. In my point that is not the correct thing.
Firstly the growth of the metropolis is obviously needed at the same time we need to go in proper structure of building structures in empty spaces. setting up of the buildings in the metropolitan shows the growth of the finance. With that so many unemployment’s will get jobs and they will give develop of the country economy. On the basis of that reason government of the country gives the permission for enlargement of the lands. But in present scenario, most cities the free space is vanished. For that some high level persons eye kept on countryside land.
These persons trying to pull the lands from the farmers which are living in countryside by showing lump sum amount money. but this practice will leads to reduce in the food productions and some other valuable mineral accessibility. Most of the people believe that establishment of homes or industries in agriculture land will definitely affect the world.
Finally In my opinion development of the country is must and should but we should not forget basic human roots. The constructing the buildings in the green belt gives the eradication of human life. so, I strongly oppose of the constructions in the farmland.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1341.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98513011152 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91910814377 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576208178439 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.2187607833 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.5 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.83333333333 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.185610848036 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0530987987966 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040808483912 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099230832545 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318493820859 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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