Some people consider price as the most important thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cellphone) or a service (e.g medical treatment) do you agree or disagree?
money is the most precious and important thing in everyone's daily life. Without the money there is no proper life in current generation. With that we can do the lot of things such as buying products,lands, food and for medical treatments etc. Based on having the money there are three types of class people are present. they are Poor,middle-class, and rich people. I completely agree with that lot of humans consider amount plays a vital role for purchasing the products and obtains some medical facilities. The details explanation of accepting the price is the crucial part to think about get the goods is given in the below paragraphs.
First of all there are the lot of situations leads to considering the cost of the goods while purchasing. In this mainly poor group people are very particularly think about the price of the each product at the time of buying. In this class persons are un-educated and under rated wage daily working people, so that they will be very careful while they spending their cash on product obtaining from the stores.
In second classification that is middle-class people mentality is different when compared to remaining two group of people. they will getting things according to their salary.In this section people sometimes look it into the cost of the product while they are going to purchasing. Depends on their need they will look into the price tag of the buying products.
At end of the close, I totally obey that more people considering the price of the product will consider while they are purchasing them. Because money rules the world.
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...onsider while they are purchasing them. Because money rules the world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, second, so, while, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92537313433 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67950980179 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541044776119 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 396.0 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.5053410218 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.0 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.8 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271062650882 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799302457634 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0704735502597 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161857045236 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651078457782 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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