Many small-town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?
these days, many people from countryside prefer to go to metropolis for shopping. this is because of the advantages it brings to the shoppers in terms of convenience and pricing. Nevertheless, this trend has contributed to closing of businesses in the country-side due to lack of activity.
To start with, people opt to shop from malls present in cities because of its convenience. these malls offer everything including groceries, clothing, electronics, and much more under one roof. Hence, these malls can be considered as a one-stop shop for everything. Along with its convenience, it also proposes amazing prices and offers to its customers such as buy one get one free. Moreover, these shops provide great customer service experience to its customers by employing professional staff. As more and more people are attracted to these malls, businesses in cities are flourishing than ever before.
On the flip side, shops within the rural areas are going out of business as they are unable to sell their products. such a trend has contributed to slow economic development of the country-side. If this situation, persists for long, it is likely that the living standard of rural dwellers will be reduced overtime as well. also, the movement of people from country-side to cities contribute to chaotic environment and traffic congestion. As more and more people use cars to commute from rural to urban areas.
All in all, although shipping from large malls in the cities brings a lot of benefits to the shoppers but its drawbacks are more pronounced due to its devastating effect on the economic development of the rural areas.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, well, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12734082397 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89787941706 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561797752809 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.0342311341 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172717192458 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621855009523 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473304761357 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106076654127 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0345279183356 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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