Many small town center shops are running out of business because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the disadvantages of this development outweigh the advantages?
It is generally known that the countryside dwellers opt for shopping in metropolis rather than shopping in nearby stores. Although this trend might have some benefits, I believe its drawbacks are more significant.
On the one hand, the advantages of shopping in the city are variable. First, regarding clients, shopping for specific items, wedding dresses for example, in big malls can offer them versatility in both brands and prices, owing to the competition between vast numbers of shops. As for the sellers, the greater the number of customers, the greater the profit the shops will gain, and this profit can contribute to a lot of payments such as taxes and employee’s fees.
On the other hand, I suppose the disadvantages of this development would eclipse the mentioned advantages. To begin with, the decrease in the number of people shopping from town may develop long recession periods for small businesses which can lead to the closure of these shops, consequently, a lot of employees may lose their jobs. In 2017, a study by the ministry of labour in Egypt showed that the rate of unemployment in the countryside has sharply increased by 22% due to the bankruptcy of many small shops. Furthermore, the only way to access to big cities is to use different transportation means, which can eventually raise the levels of pollution and fuel consumption.
To conclude, I am of the opinion that the demerits of preferring the countryside residents to shop away from their homes in terms of pollution, bankruptcy and unemployment are more notable than the merits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, so, well, as for, for example, i suppose, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06538461538 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94349900468 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.1621510293 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.2 7.06120827912 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.21799741116 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0846535676052 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046118140432 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116720977428 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344307901207 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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