Many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day or in their free time and have health problems as a result.
Why do so many working people not get enough exercise?
What can be done about this problem?
Nowadays, many working people get little or no exercise either during the working day in their free time, and have health problem as a result. In this essay I would examine the reason why some people do not practice at their job or at home. the end of article, there is conclusion.
In the one hand, many folk cannot exercise while tasking in company, because they must to finish documents or duties either home. they do not think too much about the sport and sometime they get problems health. After working they choose to drink wine to remove stress. As a results they do not have time to positive activities. The other hand, consumption of sugar or coffee too much, it will be impact to body health, such as heart attack, calories, weight problem, obesity and any other. Habit change is prominent to get a better life
To solve that problem. They must arrange it the time of working and whole of activities all-day. It help their to manage the most important one than other. Other solution, the can book soccer field and invite colleagues to participate and do it regularly at least once for a week. Consultation in consultant is helpful because they support to get complete problems. In addition, many activities can be done with number of family such as jogging and basketball. When want to get serious program, gym is provided a lesson which reduce a weight.
To sum up this article, main of reason few of people do not exercise because of habit and other reason is job task. Tackle of that matter, they can scheduale a activities sport or invite a family member or taking a membership in gym which provide tutor lesson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 242, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...o not practice at their job or at home. the end of article, there is conclusion. I...
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Line 2, column 83, Rule ID: MUST_HAVE_TO[1]
Message: After 'must', the verb is used without 'to'. Probably, you should use 'must' or 'have to' here.
Suggestion: must; have to
... while tasking in company, because they must to finish documents or duties either home....
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Line 2, column 130, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...finish documents or duties either home. they do not think too much about the sport a...
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Line 2, column 212, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... and sometime they get problems health. After working they choose to drink wine to re...
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Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... choose to drink wine to remove stress. As a results they do not have time to posi...
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Line 2, column 273, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a result' or simply 'results'?
Suggestion: a result; results
...oose to drink wine to remove stress. As a results they do not have time to positive activ...
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Line 2, column 537, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...change is prominent to get a better life To solve that problem. They must arrange...
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Line 3, column 101, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...ing and whole of activities all-day. It help their to manage the most important one ...
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Line 4, column 158, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ckle of that matter, they can scheduale a activities sport or invite a family mem...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, while, at least, in addition, such as, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1343.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66319444444 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42148854444 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5625 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 427.5 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3013310949 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.0 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.05882352941 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.420829160872 0.244688304435 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120163955458 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162619170201 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266781982807 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.177199536668 0.056905535591 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.45 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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