The mark of a successful person is to be wealthy and have a successful career. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Defining success of life is a very difficult approach. Most people say success of life is based on amount of money and success of the career. Success of life does not depend only on those two factors. Number of other factors should fulfil to achieve success and it depends on the person. This essay discusses about those factors in detail.
In the beginning, perspective of success differs from one person to another. Considerable portion of people think success is the knowledge they acquire to lighten their mind. For example, scientist believe success is the innovation and knowledge. They are eager in inventing new concepts. They don’t even bother about their family life or the financial status and has devoted entire life for research. No one can argue saying their life is not successful.
Secondly, people who live in village think success is the value and respect they gain for their ideas. Also, the status they have among others with in the village. They strive on social respect and family values rather than career or education.
Furthermore, most people in the society measure success of people based on their outer appearance. The evaluation is based on the size of the house, number of vehicles, places they go for shopping and holiday destinations. But success mainly depend on the physical and mental health, stability of the family life and satisfaction they have with what they have.
In conclusion, success of a person doesn’t depend only on the success of the career and the amount of money. There are many other factors that should be considered when measuring success.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'furthermore', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'for example', 'in conclusion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.301324503311 0.247107183377 122% => OK
Verbs: 0.145695364238 0.155533422707 94% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0496688741722 0.0946595960268 52% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0397350993377 0.0501214627716 79% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0496688741722 0.0437548338989 114% => OK
Prepositions: 0.135761589404 0.122226691241 111% => OK
Participles: 0.0298013245033 0.0403226058552 74% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.52501756833 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.00993377483444 0.0326793684256 30% => Some infinitives wanted.
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0827814569536 0.0861772015684 96% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.00993377483444 0.021408717616 46% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0132450331126 0.011925033212 111% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1614.0 1933.35771543 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 316.048096192 84% => OK
Chars per words: 6.06766917293 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.40977443609 0.374742101984 109% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.266917293233 0.28420135186 94% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.139097744361 0.203846283523 68% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.109022556391 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52501756833 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.037074148 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526315789474 0.56093040696 94% => OK
Word variations: 51.3120434305 60.7387585426 84% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0891783567 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.4217865279 49.517814964 53% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.9473684211 127.492653851 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7743622355 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.473684210526 0.814263465372 58% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 3.99599198397 0% => OK
Readability: 40.6917293233 49.1944974215 83% => OK
Elegance: 1.98591549296 1.69124875643 117% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271455384014 0.332605444948 82% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.122933414911 0.102741220458 120% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0816708093154 0.0668466124924 122% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.53386609035 0.534860350844 100% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.151043195169 0.148594505496 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102788348604 0.134430193775 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.062017560873 0.0742795772207 83% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.368790936134 0.324371583561 114% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0306230000486 0.0638462369009 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176413750347 0.228012699653 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.026968506322 0.058150111329 46% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.41683366733 59% => OK
Positive topic words: 8.0 5.90881763527 135% => OK
Negative topic words: 1.0 2.5751503006 39% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 9.0 10.4468937876 86% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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