Marriages in many countries are more expensive nowadays. Is it a positive or negative development and why do you think so?
<div><br>- Marriage is the legal relationship between two people which is witnessed by the families and friends. There have been many speculations that people tend to be extravagant for their marriage ceremony. In recent years, money spent on marriages has grown tremendously on a global level. Some experts believe that this a positive trend while others opine differently. I am of the opinion that it should be a less expensive and budget-friendly affair for two reasons and this essay will discuss the same with a reasoned conclusion.</div><div>The most vital point for the aforementioned situation is that this trend leads to financial instabilities if not planned appropriately. For instance, in many Asian countries’ youngsters fail to plan their marriage in a reasonable way and tend to fall in the trap of wedding planner for planning their marriage, just out of fashion which cost them huge. For which, they land up taking loans for their marriage and in the long run make it difficult to repay the amount. So, it is always recommended to plan your ceremony as per your budget. Thus, taking your own financial decision is a must in your marriage.</div><div>Another point which is convincing to me is that while organizing the marriage ceremony lots of resources is been utilized. According to the survey of 2018 by Times magazine, there have been 53% of food and water wastage in the marriage ceremony. In many countries, marriage is not a one-day celebration it takes a week to celebrate in a grand way. Many people are invited to these celebrations. Some people come and join the celebration while others do not turn up, as per their convenience. Thereby, leading to a lot of food wastage and for cleaning the mess created water is been utilized. Thus, this celebration leads to wastage of food and water which could have been used for better purposes.<br>To sum up, in my opinion just to satisfy your friends and relatives spending a huge amount of money on marriage is whimsical. It leads to exhaustion of resources like water and disturbing your finances which could impact on their future.<br></div>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a reasonable way" with adverb for "reasonable"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... youngsters fail to plan their marriage in a reasonable way and tend to fall in the trap of wedding...
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Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'recommended planning'.
Suggestion: recommended planning
...t to repay the amount. So, it is always recommended to plan your ceremony as per your budget. Thus,...
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Message: Consider replacing "in a grand way" with adverb for "grand"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...elebration it takes a week to celebrate in a grand way. Many people are invited to these celeb...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1769.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 351.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03988603989 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32839392791 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.3407786916 2.80592935109 119% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.524216524217 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.9311250452 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5625 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9375 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.6875 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108285029307 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0414231322678 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0243982086457 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108285029307 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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