Mobile phones and the Internet are used by millions of people every day, but old people use these forms of technology the least. In what ways can mobile phones and the Internet be helpful for older people? What measures can be taken to encourage older people to use them more?
Since the revolution in sophisticated modern technologies, access of smartphones and internet for various purposes are inevitable. It is often argued that senior citizens are left behind to use of such digital platforms. However, larger percentage of youth are utilising these facilities without burden. In order to assist this issue, this technology can connect them to their social circle and enhance their experience in the global stage. Moreover, adults should take initiative and educate their parents for communication devices and internet services.
To begin with, there are diverse reasons why some experts believe that it would support those who are illiterate in terms of utilizing contemporary devices such as smartphones because of age factor. A primary solution would be, elderly can chat and texting to their members of family in emergency consequences. As a result, he or she gets help from families in deteriorate circumstances. Another explanation is that through internet, they can learn various skills in their retirement ages, which may lead to expand their inner horizon to acquire knowledge and information globally. A recent study, for an illustration, being published in the Economic Times revealed that those residents who are aged 60 or more willing to deploy time with a computer to chat and an access of networking sites, feel 30% more positive attitude than others. Therefore, it is essential for aged personalities to start access of new digital platforms.
Apart from this, in order to promote senior population to access of advanced communication devices and internet, adults or young children should come forward and offer a smartphone with various easy applications, which leads to start interaction with new devices. Another obvious solution is to have a social networking account in either computer or laptop, so that they start communicating with their social established connection. For an instance, hundreds of thousands aged population, particularly in developing nations, have progressed a skill to ordering necessary items online and applying various claims relating to their personal tasks such as pension and insurance in the recent years. Hence, this example speaks that motivating elder people to use of new technologies demand to update their livelihood.
To sum up, even though digital platforms demand requisite knowledge to use of smartphones and online services, many individuals have acquired this ability to link social relations. Besides, with help of youngsters, it can be learnt easily without technological barriers. It is advisable that old people should upgrade their inner knowledge to compete in this fast paced world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 763, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'access'.
Suggestion: access
...deploy time with a computer to chat and an access of networking sites, feel 30% more posi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, may, moreover, so, therefore, apart from, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2281.0 1615.20841683 141% => OK
No of words: 412.0 315.596192385 131% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53640776699 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94488101727 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 240.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582524271845 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 506.74238477 142% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.9908645201 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.722222222 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8888888889 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27777777778 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142860709745 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.048150985025 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399735122822 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956320851717 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0291374793664 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 136.0 78.4519038076 173% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.