Modern communications mean that it’s no longer necessary to write letters.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
For centuries people have been using letters to connect with each other, to share good or bad news with family members or to communicate with different agencies and establishments. However, as of late, the traditional letter is being replaced with modern electronic mail.This begs the question of whether letters will be completely replaced by modern means of communication or not.
Letters have a sentimental value for some people since they represent a physical proof of their memories with their loved ones. There is also letters that are a testament of career or educational achievement which make their recipients very happy. Furthermore, official agencies tend to communicate with citizens through a traditional mail service because not all individuals have internet access and consequently might not have an e-mailing account.
E-mails on the other hand offer a faster and more efficient way of conveying messages because they are delivered instantly. They do not requires no costs whatsoever as opposed to the fee charged when sending a regular letter. As a result, one can also expect a faster reply to their messages in contrast to the potentially long period of time that it takes for a letter to be delivered to one's mail box.
In conclusion, I personally do not believe that e-mails and similar connection methods will entirely replace the traditional letter in some cases as mentioned. However, I also expect that in the upcoming years the number of people exclusively using e-mails to communicate will increase since they save time and require no charge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...ng replaced with modern electronic mail.This begs the question of whether letters wi...
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Line 1, column 282, Rule ID: WHETHER[3]
Message: Wordiness: Shorten this phrase to the shortest possible suggestion.
Suggestion: whether; the question whether
...d with modern electronic mail.This begs the question of whether letters will be completely replaced by ...
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Line 5, column 137, Rule ID: DONT_NEEDS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'require'?
Suggestion: require
...ey are delivered instantly. They do not requires no costs whatsoever as opposed to the f...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...ges in contrast to the potentially long period of time that it takes for a letter to be delive...
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Line 5, column 390, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...t takes for a letter to be delivered to ones mail box. In conclusion, I personal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, however, if, so, in conclusion, in contrast, as a result, in contrast to, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1326.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24110671937 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87795895604 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592885375494 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 34.0148496983 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.6 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0899728002797 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377404739008 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292295342219 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0583776781875 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331184696832 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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