In modern times, young adults are spending less time with their families and more time with their friends. WHY has this change occurred? DO you think parents should force their children to spend more time at home?
Nowadays, adolescents are inclining to spend the majority of time with their friends rather than their family members. Not only will this essay discuss the reasons for such trend to occur but it will also explain my reasons why I believe parents should forcibly make their children spend more time at home.
The technological era and the fast paced world that people live in these days have made the gap between generations to grow large. To illustrate, youngsters usually opt to live in the virtual world of social media, such as Facebook, and electronic games, in which, they can find peers with mutual interests that they may not find with their family members. In addition, most of millennial parents work for extended hours in order to fulfill the needs of their families; therefore, they do not get free time to integrate themselves in their children’s lives. If the gap between fosters and children is large, the chances of children’s alienation will increase between them.
In my perspective, being of a dire impact on all family members, parents ought to oblige the children to devote more time for family in order to bridge the mentioned gap. Firstly, children are more susceptible for negative social media peer pressure if they spend most of their time on the Internet without proper supervision, which may lead to deviation in their morals, as per several studies by human development specialists. Another impact, many hours staying away from parents can cause bonds between family members to weaken, and this may breed crime among children due to lack of guidance.
To conclude, the widespread trend of children sparing more time with friends might be attributable to the distant in interests and lack of time, and I opine that forcing children to spend more time with their families is of utmost importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, so, therefore, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.04605263158 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63695995902 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565789473684 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 47.7137296803 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 153.4 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.4 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.1 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.467222034217 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.187510597033 0.084324248473 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.134813801142 0.0667982634062 202% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.329143192328 0.151304729494 218% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118398132814 0.056905535591 208% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.49 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.97 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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