Today’s technological advancements have made the workplace less of a physical venue and more of a virtual space, with companies increasingly enabling their employees to work from home. In my opinion, the benefits of this trend largely outweigh its disadvantages.
For employees, working from home reduces travelling time and increases working flexibility. Worsening traffic congestion and threats of road accidents in major cities over the world make the majority of workers find daily commuting frustrating and demotivating, hence affecting their job satisfaction. Meanwhile, many claim to be more creative and productive when working at home, being released from management scrutiny and unnecessary workmate chatting. For business owners, such working arrangements are financially beneficial in terms of savings on timekeeping, office space as well as utilities expenses. They can, in addition, access applicants who are from more geographically remote areas. Environmentally, home working contributes to mitigate air pollution since less travelling means less carbon dioxide emission.
Although opponents to teleworking might argue that it encourages laziness and negligence as home workers would allow personal chores to interfere with work, recent management strategies have assisted employers in effectively controlling employees’ performances without having them in sight. These include establishing performance indicators, conducting occasional review meetings and employing real-time reporting platforms. Home working employees therefore are well motivated to ensure their job deliverables, while feeling trusted and embraced by their leaders.
In conclusion, I believe a shift away from office to home as a work base is inevitable, considering current socioeconomic factors. Companies who wish to take advantage of this movement will have to apply appropriate management measures in order to maximize its benefits for both owners and employees.
- More and more companies are allowing their employees to work from home rather than going to office each day Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages 84
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun claim seems to be countable; consider using: 'many claims'.
Suggestion: many claims
...ting their job satisfaction. Meanwhile, many claim to be more creative and productive when...
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Line 3, column 773, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun travelling is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ributes to mitigate air pollution since less travelling means less carbon dioxide em...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oxide emission. Although opponents to teleworking might argue that it encourag...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.13043478261 5.12529762239 120% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.2302426455 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.70652173913 0.561755894193 126% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.3584339827 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.153846154 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2307692308 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46153846154 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.306222019322 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0974449981636 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591461383538 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178577025624 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0474297812389 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.78 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.27 12.4159519038 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.14 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 113.0 78.4519038076 144% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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