More and more companies produce goods in the factories located in different countries other than the location of the head office. Does this development has more advantages or disadvantages?
An ever-increasing number of organisations generate products in the manufacturing plants situated in different nations rather than the location of the main office. This trend is more advantageous as it assures increased opportunities for employment to workers in other countries as manufacturing units will be located in various parts of the worlds. This essay will discuss the most significant advantages of this phenomenon, and will also demonstrate the way in which the merits outweigh the demerits.
To embark with, Using separate places for head office and manufacturing is beneficial for both the company and for the workforce of a country. Usually, most of the organisations would choose to build factories in areas where the economy is not rising in order to cut its costs by employing an affordable workforce. Moreover, people of that locality will get jobs and thus, this strategy will benefit companies and people of under developing countries. For instance, Himachal Pradesh is a state in India that provides a tax benefit to any company which would wish to set up their business there. Consequently, the job opportunities in the state rose dramatically, and now the native residents do not have to move to other places for work.
However, if a corporation prefers to have a single location to manufacture products and maintaining a head office, the cost of owning such a big piece of land in the city centres would affect its running costs. In addition to that, the presence of factories in the main parts of the city will also elevate pollution levels and will make the living conditions adverse to its inhabitants. For example, Bejing is well known for its high pollution levels due to the advent of industries situated there.
In conclusion, the pros of using separate locations for the main offices and the processing plants are highly beneficial. As they do not only open doors for employment to individuals of other nation, but also helps to maintain contamination free environment in cities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1694.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14893617021 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01126385716 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559270516717 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 25.8207292533 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 130.307692308 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3076923077 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191357092289 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.062943566971 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0635176246415 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111160945944 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0835782593478 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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