More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
<div><span style="font-size: 13px;">In today's modern world where technology is within our fingertips, the number of parents allowing children to play on devices like computers and tablets is increasing as they claim that it is vital for children to learn technology skills. The writer believes that the advantages are greater than the disadvantages which will be discussed in this essay.</span></div><div><br></div><div><span style="font-size: 13px;">To begin, usually, anything that is too much has its drawbacks and this matter at hand is not an exception. Kids with their computers if not properly administered by parents can cause serious negative effects such as game addiction, short attention span and lack of social skills. In addition, there are sensitive contents over the internet that is not suitable for the young ones which can be accessed very easily.</span></div><div><br></div><div><span style="font-size: 13px;">On the other hand, there are significant advantages it can bring to children. First of all, being skilled in technology prepares them in this modern world where schools are starting to incorporate modern technologies in classroom learning like the use of tablets with interactive apps that makes learning more fun and could set them up for a career in technology. Second of all, when properly supervised by parents like setting up parental locks and personally guiding the children, the internet can be very valuable as there are tons of learning materials that can be accessed.</span></div><div><br></div><div><span style="font-size: 13px;">To sum it all up, although this matter has its disadvantages, these are still outweighed by the advantages with the right supervision and guidance as there is no denying that technology has changed people's lives and because it is ever evolving, it is important for kids to learn how things work and how to use them.</span></div>
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- More and more parents are allowing their children to play on computers and tablets as they think that children should learn technology skills. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages? 39
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1200, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to like'
Suggestion: to like
...dern technologies in classroom learning like the use of tablets with interactive app...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, so, still, in addition, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1658.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.85865724382 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.43654246343 2.80592935109 194% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579505300353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 476.1 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 47.0 20.2975951904 232% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 137.82688417 49.4020404114 279% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 276.333333333 106.682146367 259% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 47.1666666667 20.7667163134 227% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 13.8333333333 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205153498742 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120275038508 0.084324248473 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0793058692345 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205153498742 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 29.8 13.0946893788 228% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 15.31 50.2224549098 30% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.6 12.4159519038 142% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.04 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 20.8 10.1190380762 206% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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