More and more people are choosing ready to eat food rather cooking themselves. Do this development has more advantages over disadvantages?
In this time and age, most of the populace are patronizing ready-made meal. Which has a lot of benefits to the masses as well as drawbacks to their lifestyle.
To start with, citizen in this era are usually eating food which are easy to cooking like, Instant noodles, Canned meat products and microwavable dishes. This habit has a huge downside mainly their health will suffer if they continue to ingest these kind of food. The ingredients of this kind of meals have a lot additives, chemicals and unwanted nutrients which can lead to serious illnesses in the near future.
However, people in the present time continue to consume this kind of food due to the fact that it has less time to wait for the meal to be cook. Institutions plays a huge role why individuals tend to choose this kind of dishes because they give them ample time to take their lunch breaks. Another is that the travel time of the people going to their respective jobs and going home are lengthy. That is why people are continuously ingesting these kinds of viands in order for them to get their energy replenish in a short amount of time.
In addition, eating ready to eat food is economically better than cooking their own food it saves a lot of money. Most of the masses who are working to meet ends tend to patronize this kinds of dish because they only earn ample amount of finances. Furthermore an average working adult have a lot of bills to pay so instead of buying and cooking their own meal they instead purchase delectable viands which is ready to eat and cheaper than preparing their own food.
In conclusion, I concur that eating ready to eat meals are cheaper to the working citizen. As well as it gives them a lot of time to tend to their family and accomplish their job responsibilities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
... will suffer if they continue to ingest these kind of food. The ingredients of this kind o...
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Line 7, column 181, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... working to meet ends tend to patronize this kinds of dish because they only earn am...
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Line 7, column 249, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Furthermore,
...hey only earn ample amount of finances. Furthermore an average working adult have a lot of ...
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Line 9, column 198, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... accomplish their job responsibilities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60815047022 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48436903536 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.492163009404 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.2982192995 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.0 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14836231197 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617552335984 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0481862166923 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881579962184 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269125745003 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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