It is true that, in this contemporary era, sales of fashionable clothes are being escalated at an unprecedented rate. However, an increasing number of people introspect that it is indispensable to wear only trendy attires. According to my perspective, it has enormous of negative effects.
To commence with, most of the people follow some well known celebrities who wear expensive clothes. Although, some people have no money, they force their parents for purchasing these clothes. Additionally, when parents refuse to buy these they start taking heinous steps like kidnapping, muder for money. Another reason could be, sizeable majority of individuals prefer to waste their time on selecting some branded clothes on some online apps which harms their eyes. Thirdly, it also impacts our traditional culture. Moreover, in the past, elders used to say wear full clothes rather than half like, kurta pajama. To exemplify, according to a survey, it can be manifested that only 38% people are following their own traditional clothes. Additionally, it is still decreasing day by day.
Looking on the other views, since the rate of fashionable attires have rosen, people are curious to wear new clothes in their life. First and foremost, it helps to keep society updated with modern world. Secondly, whenever people wear some good clothes and go here and there they feel comfortable and it enhances their personality as well as confidence level. Thirdly, we can easily adapt any culture or take some knowledge about their countries through clothes.
On a concluding note, undoubtedly, new fashion and clothes are being launched these days in the markets. Eventually, these things are best because we want to stay updated yet, we must understand that we have our own traditional clothes and we should follow our culture too because we cannot leave our culture for getting new things in our life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, well, as well as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21967213115 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71672534751 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.6935741571 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.6470588235 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9411764706 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.76470588235 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202321838956 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0672596839921 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063839471878 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136306663863 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0577982228596 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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