More and more people are forgetting the actual meaning of occasions (e.g. national festivals). What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions do you suggest?
It is undoubtedly that traditions are being disappeared in this modern era. Individuals are almost neglecting the meaning of their cultural occasions these days. I will subtentiate the causes and suggest some solutions for this practice in the subsequent paragraphs.
To begin with, there are various reasons why people are mostly unfamiliar with the significance of such occasions. The first and the foremost is the effect of globalisation, as more and more people are migrating to the foreign countries as well as getting influenced by western customs. For example, an article published has shown that nowadays almost 60% people moving overseas are not only adapting their cultures but also celebrating their festivals as their own such as christmas, halloween, and so on. Consequently, it also affects their children as they are not provided with any information about their religious beliefs. Apart from this, people prefer enjoyment over celebrating any festival and knowing the meaning of it. To illustrate, people nowadays celebrate festivals to gather and enjoy their time but not to celebrate them.
Moving further, there are numerous ways to motivate people towards traditions. Initially, kids should be taught about their cultural values by their parents because they have great impact on them. Apart from this, students should also be encouraged to take some cutural courses at the university. For instance, cultural studies, history and many more. Moreover, Government should also take some steps towards the disappearing of traditions and also should open some art galleries and museums with no entry fees.
To conclude, although people want to enjoy themselves but they should also be aware of their reasons of celebrations, otherwise they would be lost in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, such as, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1515.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44964028777 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78114320338 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4839192405 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5333333333 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126677316197 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0510581486229 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443472086862 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0795691131914 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508441273161 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.33 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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