Over the last few decades, there has been an unprecedented rise in urbanisation. A growing number of individuals from rural areas are settling into cities to find better employment opportunities. This trend has several negative influences which are going to be discussed in the following paragraphs along with the solutions.
To begin with, this new social change will produce tremendous stress and pressure in the job sector. As graduates are already facing fierce competition in the job market , more people in the cities would intensify the situation. It is highly probable that the job recruiters would demand more from the applicants while selecting them for jobs , which again give rise to a tensious atmosphere. Resultantly , there would be more jobless graduates in the cities , giving rise to unemployment problem.
Secondly , this change will negatively affect the crop production and hence the nation economy. To elaborate , if the workers from agricultural fields will move to the cities , there would be lack of effective manual workforce in the agricultural farms to carry out several farming practices. This will not only impair the quality of crops but also highly decrease their quantity. Consequently , taking a long term perspective , people may have to suffer from the lack of supply of food products such as wheat , rice and others . In all , these all factors will adversely affect the national economy.
Moving further , few measures can be suggested in order to reverse this problem. Firstly , cost prices of crops should be increased. As currently farmers receive very little prices for their crops in the market , which compels them to find jobs in factories or industries instead. However , increased cost for their crops would encourage them to continue with farming. Another solution has to come from reducing the prices of various fertilizers , seeds and pesticides so that farmers can easily purchase them .
To conclude , it can be reiterated that the trend of migration from non-urban areas to populated areas would cause severe consequences on the societies and nation as a whole. However , by taking some constructive solutions , this problem can be mitigated .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, as to, in fact, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 7.85571142285 216% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1844.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34492753623 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83265278058 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582608695652 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 567.0 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.0696256731 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.0526315789 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1578947368 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270175418632 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076973162146 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433003278338 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135910123621 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.030045657546 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.