More and more people are moving away from an agricultural background to cities in order to look for work.
What will be the consequences of this?
What solutions can be offered?
At present, a growing number of people from farming regions are relocating to urban ones to find employment. This migration causes some negative impacts on cities, which the government needs deal with. This essay will consider these challenges and suggest possible solutions.
Let us start with problems the relocation of people from agricultural areas to city in search of jobs. The first problem is that the country often experiences a shortage of crops. The supply of crops to large cities may decline, since farmers will stop growing both vegetables and fruit. Another negative repercussion is that cities may become overpopulated. City councils will be driven either to find accommodation or develop new buildings for former villagers, who come in large numbers, in the densely populated districts. Furthermore, farming industry may become weaker. Children from rural areas will gradually forget how to plant and irrigate crops, resulting in the loss of gardening skills and importing farm agricultural products abroad.
City authorities can take the following action to solve the above mentioned difficulties. First of all the government can create more workplaces. For example, it can open a factory that will process crops for export, so that villagers will stay in the countryside rather than move to cities. Secondly, the agriculture minister can equip farmers with machines. The government can interest people in rural regions with modern technology, such as tractors and harvesters, so that they can be content with their work in the field and think that the state cares for them. Moreover, it can subsidise them in the sowing season. Farmers can work diligently and eagerly if authorities suggest them financial support and loans at lower interest, so that they can purchase more cars as well as develop new field for seeding.
In conclusion, the migration of job seekers from rural places to cities may cause a plenty of problems, but it is possible to avoid them by assisting them in countryside.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1699.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27639751553 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77890621302 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593167701863 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 513.9 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8120231904 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.3888888889 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256519121763 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0697334946192 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0422797393897 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124317294275 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.068836198641 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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